Resume Review ASAP BEING ASKED FOR IT NOW

Looks good.

minor detail: "Topics included" if you have the rest of the bullet sin the past tense instead of "topics include"

extra space in fron of "Built a bankruptcy..."?

overall solid.

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Damn you have good eye sight!

Thanks chaps!

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I was about to leave my comments that I emailed to you yesterday before looking at, and good thing I didn't - looks like you put most of them to work already. Nice job indeed, it definitely looks better, and your formatting is far more consistent now. Good luck.

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The one other thing I would say is to either add a space under your college and under your high school before the bullets, or take the spaces out between your first bullet and positions labels for your employment - just a bit inconsistent. If you want to fill a little more space, you can instead put a space under each section title before entering the first entry - i.e. Work Experience, space, First company name.

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You have a great resume for your career stage! Very well worded, achievement oriented.

One change:

Change "met with executives... to give recommendations"

You don't want to lead a bullet point with a passive action. Just say that your your recommendations were implemented and lead to increased profits.

That a very good resume...overall solid..Good luck

Are insurance groups still writing CDS's?

by the way, good resume

did he ask for the resume for possible consideration for a 2010 FT analyst position? damn so things are starting to move already?? i need to switch gears

if you would notice, he graduates in 2011

Agreed with Buyside CFA, great!

Should SAT be on there?

I don't know of a need to have Advanced Photoshop, also it makes the line break.

I wonder if you should take off the High School (?), and put Project Euler detail in there instead. I might even pop-off the Engineering Intern to have Project Euler in there.

Also, maybe organize the job achievements so it reads well. You can do this in two ways, either "responsiblity oriented", like: "Calculated...Performed...Met." Or "category oriented", like organizing the bullet points under subheadings: "Credit analysis", "Leadership Roles."

Thanks for that guys, I sent it out right at 11:30 and took all of your advice. He has said he would like to speak to me next week sometime so I'm excited :D

I left highschool on there because I wanted to make my self stand out, I think going to high school in Britain would at least make a good convo point.

Thanks for your help again guys, I really appreciate it.

"Banking - It is what it is"