Resume Review - Forwarding it to an MD

Yacht_man

14y

Also, is it me, or do every single one of our resumes look the same? HR must get incredibly bored reading the same type of resume over and over.

ShreddiesBrah

14y

Yacht_man:
Also, is it me, or do every single one of our resumes look the same? HR must get incredibly bored reading the same type of resume over and over.

The template on M&I has pretty much become the standard now

Memorandum of Understanding MOU

14y

Nope, midwest. I don't know much about MK's banking (I'm assuming that's what you're interested in)but I believe they have a few boutique bank affiliates.

formerMD

14y

Looks compelling and good use of the S-A-R framework (http://bit.ly/2Mzo3) to describe your accomplishments. Go for it and good luck.

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BankonBanking

14y

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Overall, nice job - I like the format (it's the one I use and have used for a few years - it's definitely solid). A few quick things: Take out "Daily reader of WSJ..." it's not necessary, as everyone should be doing that if they are interested in the bus - at least WSJ, not sure about yahoo. Pull back your sub bullet a bit so that at least the coursework line where you name the courses fits on 1 line instead of 2. Bullet your "Activities:" and "Interests:" - in other words, put a bullet before them so that everything sub headings is bulleted. Regarding a few of your bullet points, where you start with "responsible" or "in charge of" switch them out for action verbs such as "managed, led, maintained" etc. Take out the "/4.0". Other than that, it looks pretty solid - I didn't really read the content as much as take a skim through it, but it gives a good first impression.

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14y

Thanks for the input everyone

bigballs

14y

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