Rip apart my resume WSO

Looking for entry level positions in something corporate finance, credit analyst, or maybe something with Vanguard

Edit: Here's a link

http://www.aww-kittah-aww.com/up/public/187900/Cr…

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Make it assistant treasurer instead of treasurer's assistant or whatever. Reword the part about the 'top 25 car washes' part it sounds weird and I thought it was a joke.

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Resume looks decent, but could use some improvement. Paying someone to do it would be a lot easier. I think Patrick has a service for this.

 
ANTResume looks decent, but could use some improvement. Paying someone to do it would be a lot easier. I think Patrick has a service for this.
I'll look into it
 
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Spellcheck!!!! I can't highlight this enough. If you are applying to Corporate Finance where attention to detail is key, one small error on the resume will already throw you out of the game (I actually had that happen to me once and I believe my mistake was two spaces rather than one....oh well). I didn't go through your entire resume in detail, but its ebiTDa, not ebiDTa like it says on your resume. Other than that, add a line about some of your quantitative coursework (classes that might be important/interesting for banking), your language skills (do you speak anything else but english?) and I would possibly also include your high-school gpa if it is above 3.7. Your academic section definitely looks a bit empty. Also, did you play any varsity sport? Definitely put that on there, banks love it.

One of the other things I noticed is that all your work experience was acquired in lebanon, pa. Are you applying somewhere outside of that place, because otherwise it almost makes you look like you want to stay there. Do you by any chance have any work experience outside of pa? it would definitely look better to have at least one other place on there (if not, don't worry about it too much).

 

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