Rip on my Resume
As the title states, be brutally honest.
Keywords
As the title states, be brutally honest.
Career Resources
WSO Virtual Bootcamps
Career Advancement Opportunities
June 2026 Investment Banking
Overall Employee Satisfaction
June 2026 Investment Banking
Professional Growth Opportunities
June 2026 Investment Banking
Total Avg Compensation
June 2026 Investment Banking
“... there’s no excuse to not take advantage of the resources out there available to you. Best value for your $ are the...”
Leaderboard
| 1 | 99.2 | |
| 2 | 99.0 | |
| 3 | 99.0 | |
| 4 | 99.0 | |
| 5 | 98.9 | |
| 6 | 98.9 | |
| 7 | 98.9 | |
| 8 | 98.9 | |
| 9 | 98.9 | |
| 10 | 98.8 |
“... I believe it was the single biggest reason why I ended up with an offer...”
Get instant access to lessons taught by experienced private equity pros and bulge bracket investment bankers including financial statement modeling, DCF, M&A, LBO, Comps and Excel Modeling.
Hey my dude. I have a few suggestions and questions for you. Fist off, are you graduating in 2011? If so, remove the high school section. What sort of positions do you want to pursue? If FO IB, your GPA is a bit low, concentrate on finishing the year with all A's. The profile section and overall construction is rather sophomoric. Consider a more professional format. Third bullet under competition, start the highlight with a past tense verb. Do not end bullet points with a period.
To be entirely candid, you need to consider attaining a challenging internship that will catch the interest of prospective employers. Consider interning part time unpaid during this spring semester.
Give us an idea of what sort of career path you want to explore ensuing graduation so that we can provide advice that is more focused.
jmayhem, i'm not a big fan of your entire "profile" section. it contains a lot of hackneyed phrases ("detail sensitive", "analytical and communicative skills", "go above and beyond what is required"). it would be much more effective to demonstrate these qualities in your experience and activities sections. if i were you i would get rid of it.
in all honesty, you lack relevant internship experience but otherwise have solid resume. i agree with ibankedout, try beefing up your experience with internships in spring, or even in the summer after graduation (do them unpaid if you can afford to).
Dude, take the profile section out.
Your GPA is rather low, so maybe try including your major GPA if it is higher than your cumulative.
Given that your graduation date is 2011, I don't know how much you can do to increase your work experience, which is rather weak (regardless of what area in finance you want to break into), but you might want to consider taking up a part-time internship during the school year.
I'm also not a big fan of those gray bars.
You can take your high school off. Unless you went to Choate Rosemary or something, you should save that room for something more important on your resume.
If you want more criticism, you're going to have to specify what your goals are.
UBC doesn't have a B.Management, but a BComm. Maybe you should specify that you go to UBC-Okanagan to avoid confusing recruiters who are familiar with Sauder.
Definitely take out the high school and expand on the other sections a bit more.
I thought they merged...?
Laudantium natus consequuntur id. Dolorem soluta aliquam nisi reiciendis. Culpa laboriosam quidem eum sed omnis doloribus. Voluptate architecto vitae non labore non.
Aut doloremque provident id dolorem facilis. Quis quia possimus et nihil et rem magnam. Et voluptatem esse iusto eos. Necessitatibus ab non voluptas ullam quam quo ut.
Ab sed consequatur sint et consequatur dolores. Repellendus magni placeat numquam fugiat ut dolor aliquam. Aliquam odio necessitatibus consequuntur reiciendis minus quo. Aliquid placeat natus voluptas doloribus error repellendus. Consequatur est dolorum voluptatem recusandae ad quasi delectus. Saepe sunt est nemo neque. Distinctio id nemo deserunt sapiente earum est dignissimos.
See All Comments - 100% Free
WSO depends on everyone being able to pitch in when they know something. Unlock with your email and get bonus: 6 financial modeling lessons free ($199 value)
or Unlock with your social account...