semi target resume review
I'm very interested in careers in investment banking and real estate.
I'll be giving out SBs for solid reviews. Thanks.
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Right now, it looks like any other resume. There are no results. You said that you "helped 30 - 50 students" to... what? Get better grades? Improve GPA's by .2/semester? You only have 1 result and that's under your school newspaper. It seems like you're trying to put everything you ever did on there as opposed to the most relevant stuff.
Also, why do you only have your math SAT? It looks a bit weird.
The PE role looks good and so does the start-up; expand on that. Do you know finance-related technicals: Bloomberg, VBA, etc? It looks infinitely better than Adobe and MS Office.
If you're abbreviating months, march and april should be abbreviated. I would consider Microsoft Excel part of Microsoft Office, so wouldn't show both (it's kind of a joke skill to put on there anyways). Language in your first major bullet sounds weird (maybe because of what's redacted), but i feel like there should be some a verb in front of "final layout". You've got some inconsistent comma use in your activities and interests section
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Give "Selected Projects Include:" its own line rather just tagging it on the end of that bullet point. Try to expand more on your PE Summer Analyst gig. Try to elaborate more on your Start Up bullet points
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