Critique my model

Hi everyone,

I have been practicing modeling for some time and I just created my first model from scratch. I would really love some constructive criticism and advice on how to improve. I know this model is very simple and by no means IB grade, however, I'm hoping with enough practice I will get there.

Thanks

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