Critique my Resume - What I can improve on
Hi guys,
I wanted to know if someone can critique my resume.
Rip it to shreds, chew it up, spit it out, or just tell me what I did right and what I can improve on.
I blurred my name and contact information at the top. I know you can probably still find me online In like three seconds, but I'd prefer it if those of you that do, not share it.
Thanks, Tzad
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Looks pretty good, but I really wouldn't list "Dota" as one of your interests. Seriously.
Gaming (Dota) american politics? lol Excel? You've already written BIWS financial modeling CGPA: 4.12/?? Several articles? - A numerical value would look better here
There's zero benefit in putting Dota in (Unless you're professional and winning tournaments with monetary awards), but plenty of negatives associated with the typical gamer - childish, unmotivated, no drive to succeed in life. As a hardcore Dota player, the typical reaction when I reveal this hobby is "Grow up". Why shoot yourself in the foot even before you step into the interview?
Sure, you may connect with the (rare?) Dota player interviewer, but honestly any potential discussion about Dota in a formal interview is probably bordering on cringe-worthy.
Okay that makes sense! I'll change it.
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