Financial Analyst resume.. please be harsh

I am a Senior undergrad, have a poor GPA and had a 1240 on SATs. Not sure if I should disclose that, but do have a decent amount of experience. Havent taken GMAT. Am looking for any internship/entry level job as a financial analyst. My personal investing track record so far is very good.. it is the strong point in my resume.

http://www.razume.com/documents/13987

Please let me know if you have any advice

8 Comments
 
Best Response

1) take off objective 2) don't describe yourself as 'talent' in your resume (sounds extremely cocky esp. considering the rest of your resume) 3) GPA????????? that's a big dinger. 4) you might want to reconsider the wording under "Intuitive understanding of valuation techinques". you probably want to say disc. cash flow ANALYSIS , comparable companies analysis... and don't put book value.

i don't knwo exactly what kind of financial analyst position you are looking for, but i would advise you to not be too optimistic if it is in IBD

 

Agree with everything mentioned above. I am not a fan of the format, but I suppose it is ok. Mergers and Inquisitions has a free template, I would use that. Beef up the work descriptions. You tell me what someone does in those jobs, you don't tell me what YOU did. Work descriptions should be your chance to show how you impacted the job.

Get rid of objective. That is what the cover letter is for. Personally, if you apply to an IB analyst position your objective is obviously to get an IB analyst position. It is pretty self explanatory. You might want to talk more about school. Any activities that might offset your bad GPA?

 

^^^^^^^bigmonkey31 is right on all those points.

Also, for your personal portfolio, it should be "Inception", not "Conception"...they are two very different things.

If you build valuation models for your personal portfolio investments, then you may want to highlight that since your accounting experience really won't cut it...at least not in this market.

 

Hmm, I'd just be very hesitant to put those kind of returns on a resume. I had several internships in asset management before going full time to IB, and I could just see the look of the interviewer when they see that on a resume. The first thought that pops in their mind is, ok we have a senior in college who may have 5-10k under management and picked a winner, great but how would you do with $100,000 when the markets tanking?

In other words, you may want to include that in a cover letter, I just know it will possibly turn a lot of people off.

 

Take off the objective asap

  • I would not actually mention investment returns on a resume.

Remove the "Financial Experience" heading. It is not proper for a resume

Put your investment stuff under "Activities"

Work experience items need to start with past participles (end with -ed) worked cleaned bought developed

No GPA listed is a concern. You need at least a 3.50 to be fully considered by HR.

 

Sed vitae rem fugiat accusamus eveniet consequatur sint. Cumque recusandae voluptatem magnam quia molestiae dolorum. Totam voluptatem amet rerum. Atque suscipit dicta incidunt quos quia voluptas sequi sit. Fuga autem velit et laudantium eaque ipsum. Quis est quae est quo possimus tempora sit quo.

Fugiat aut pariatur autem nihil perspiciatis magni. Porro facere animi iusto est aut soluta vero dolor. Qui velit eligendi distinctio nihil iusto necessitatibus necessitatibus et. Tempora et officiis et aliquam cupiditate. Delectus et cumque corrupti et qui voluptatibus adipisci. Eum enim voluptatem labore iusto ipsam. Ut accusamus ut nostrum provident magnam natus consequatur.

Aspernatur quo rerum animi occaecati numquam et autem. Tempora culpa quia molestias delectus. Corrupti expedita sed et ex consectetur.

Ipsa dolorem recusandae neque. Omnis ut quis neque est eos et. Quidem excepturi voluptatem ut aut molestias. Adipisci modi ad omnis nihil aut. Aut repellendus dolorum modi aut.

Career Advancement Opportunities

June 2026 Investment Banking

  • Evercore 01 99.4%
  • Moelis & Company 01 98.8%
  • JPMorgan 01 98.3%
  • Guggenheim Partners 01 97.7%
  • Morgan Stanley 07 97.1%

Overall Employee Satisfaction

June 2026 Investment Banking

  • Moelis & Company No 99.4%
  • Morgan Stanley 02 98.8%
  • Evercore 01 98.2%
  • BMO Capital Markets 12 97.7%
  • Banco Santander 01 97.1%

Professional Growth Opportunities

June 2026 Investment Banking

  • Evercore 01 99.4%
  • Moelis & Company 01 98.8%
  • Morgan Stanley 05 98.3%
  • JPMorgan No 97.7%
  • BMO Capital Markets 12 97.1%

Total Avg Compensation

June 2026 Investment Banking

  • Vice President (14) $434
  • Associates (43) $259
  • 3rd+ Year Analyst (8) $210
  • 2nd Year Analyst (22) $179
  • Intern/Summer Associate (13) $156
  • 1st Year Analyst (75) $151
  • Intern/Summer Analyst (68) $101
notes
16 IB Interviews Notes

“... there’s no excuse to not take advantage of the resources out there available to you. Best value for your $ are the...”

Leaderboard

1
redever's picture
redever
99.2
2
kanon's picture
kanon
99.0
3
BankonBanking's picture
BankonBanking
99.0
4
Secyh62's picture
Secyh62
99.0
5
CompBanker's picture
CompBanker
98.9
6
Betsy Massar's picture
Betsy Massar
98.9
7
dosk17's picture
dosk17
98.9
8
GameTheory's picture
GameTheory
98.9
9
DrApeman's picture
DrApeman
98.9
10
Linda Abraham's picture
Linda Abraham
98.8
success
From 10 rejections to 1 dream investment banking internship

“... I believe it was the single biggest reason why I ended up with an offer...”