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too much irrelevant information.

" Conceptualized and trained from the company through intensive program on investing in Forex and Equity market. After completion, got an offer for the academy room supervisor. My main responsibilities were to persuade and direct newbie traders to join the academy program and provide assistance on the trading room." - Put your responsibilities in bullet points. A busy recruiter/I banker doesn't care if you got an offer after completion

High school Vice president of class and advisor of 15th council of students o Elected three years in row as vice president and last year as advisor. o Organized parties and sold memento calendars-t-shirts to raise funds for our 7day trip abroad. - No one cares that you were elected 3 years in a row as VP of you HS. This is irrelevant information

Bloomberg-Reuters(basic understanding),Eviews8,Specialized in Excel(VBA) - Inconsistent formating, add spaces after your commas

-Theres a lot of inconsistent formatting overall

 

First of all, thank you for your service.

  • Your resume is too long, shorten to one page. REMEMBER: a recruiter or I Banker is going to spend 10 seconds looking over your resume. Make sure it's easy to find key words, dates etc... (during that "10" seconds scan)
  • Use the WSO of M&I resume template
  • Delete words/partial sentences that don't add value

For example; Enacted a redeployment plan for 30 aviators and transferred operations from combat to garrison resulting in cost savings in the millions of dollars since aviators would not require retraining.

"since aviators would not require retraining." - doesn't really add value; you can further explain this in interviews if need be

You can also just shorten your sentences in general. E.g: Enacted redeployment plan for 30 aviators and transferred operations from combat to garrison resulting in multi-million dollar cost savings - I didn't remove a ton of information, but if you do similar things to all other sentences, then you can probably fit everything on one page.

 

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