Resume Questions - Semi-target

Hi, I go to a semi-target and I was wondering if anyone had any thoughts on improving my resume (phrasing, organization, etc.)
It would be much appreciated:
http://www.razume.com/documents/16714

 

@San Franciscan--fair point. I should have just put "thoughts"

@Cartwright--should I just say B.A. with Honors and not put my GPA? I toyed with this. My GPA was marred by a 2.5 freshman year as well as an illness that caused me to miss a semester.. However I worked very hard my last three years and managed to graduate with honors in English.

@bbanked--could you humor me with an example?

Thank you everyone. I was not very directed in college and am now struggling to put something presentable together.

 

@New Yorker: The problem is that I did what I whatever seemed interesting/feasible when I was in college. I thought (wrongfully so) that by graduating from a decent (top 25) school, with a "well-rounded" resume, I would be fine. I wrote three serious (20+) page research papers too, but that doesn't really fit. And yes, I wish my GPA was higher--my school is notorious for grade deflation--but I hate making excuses.

I want to work with NPOs, NGOs, education institutions, and governments in regards to consulting.

 
fiasco5077:

I want to work with NPOs, NGOs, education institutions, and governments in regards to consulting.

Honestly, if you just give up on being a consultant, this resume is good to go for the non-profit job search.

"If you can count your money, you don't have a billion dollars." - J. Paul Getty
 
San Franciscan:
fiasco5077:

I want to work with NPOs, NGOs, education institutions, and governments in regards to consulting.

Honestly, if you just give up on being a consultant, this resume is good to go for the non-profit job search.

Yes, I know that--there are plenty of education think-tanks/NPOs in DC. All my experiences at these types of organizations have been off-putting to me in different ways. Simply they deal with these high-minded, abstract ideas that will not be solved through "programming" or petitions. Think tanks meanwhile, just have you work on the research part of the "cycle" of solving a problem so that our esoteric research can be sent to a congressional hearing.

I want to work on problems that can be "solved" and identified. More so, I want to be involved in the whole cycle from identification to implementing a solution.

 

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