Resume Review - Help with Resume

Idk if you can take a constructive criticism, but I went through the same. Those that rip your resume apart are the ones that help you the most

1. B.S. Finance, Accounting, Economics => B.S. Finance; B.S. Accounting; B.S. Economics Make sure they'll understand it's a triple major (some colleges allow students create their own majors), not 1 (unless it is one, then it should be B.S. Finance, Accounting and Economics). Would it be possible to get B.A. in any of those? That would diversify your degree

2. Anticipated => Expected

3. I think we write $30MM, not $30M

4. Your Experience takes up less than 1/3 of resume, and Activities > Experience. Are you kidding me? No one gives a flying crap about your Activities in such details. Your Work Experience should be the largest part of your resume, and account for at least 60%. Delete most of frat stuff (it takes up 20% of your resume). WTF with iPCS? So you pitched one good stock that went public 5 years ago, big achievement?

5. 7 lines for Honors, and its own category? Get a life, those honors aren't so special to have their own lines on your resume. It should be under more general section with 1 bullet point

*Honors: Beta Gamma Sigma (so you are in top 10%?), Financial Management Association (how much do you pay in yearly fees?), Omicron Delta Kappa (you have to be only semi-retarded to get this one), Merit, Honor (last two are legit).

Not saying you should not list those, but don't write "Business Honor Society" or "Leadership Honor Societies". I am a student and I know those aren't legit societies. I am surprised you are not in Phi Kappa Phi, didn't get an invitation? LOLs

1. Write monthly dates on your jobs and internships, not seasons

2. And finally, don't be so wordy. You need to write more details about Work Experience and much much less about other crap.