Semi-to-non target with low CGPA but strong upwards trend and outstanding test scores. Have applied to hundreds of firms, from BBs to boutiques, and keep getting rejected. Please DESTROY my resume.

I went to a semi-to-non-target undergraduate school. Due to struggles with depression in the beginning of my undergraduate academic journey, my grades during the first two years of college were abominable. Thankfully, I was able to get my act together and achieve mostly A's during my last two years of college, but this only raised my final cumulative GPA to a subpar 3.3/4.0. However, my GPA for the last four semesters of college is 3.7/4.0. Additionally, my major GPAs are 3.7/4.0 for my finance major and 3.5/4.0 for my computer science major. 

I recently graduated in December 2023 with dual degrees in Finance and CS. Since then, I've moved back home and am currently unemployed. I've applied to hundreds of different firms, from BBs to MMs and boutiques, and although I'm advancing through the interview process at a few firms, almost all are outright rejecting me. And keep in mind that I did do several internships with small financial firms throughout my undergraduate career. I believe the main culprit is my subpar cumulative GPA (CGPA). It seems too low to get a position at the firms I'm aiming for, despite my resume also including my "Last Four Semesters GPA."

I have attached a redacted version of my resume. Please DESTROY it. Please provide the most brutal and honest feedback possible, emphasizing both the positives and the negatives.

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Ah, the classic tale of the underdog fighting to make it in the high-stakes world of finance. Let's dive into that resume of yours and see what treasures and traps lie within, shall we?

First off, kudos on the dual degrees in Finance and Computer Science. That's a powerful combo in today's data-driven finance world. It shows you've got the brains to tackle complex problems from both a financial and a technical perspective. However, it seems like your CGPA is the thorn in your side, a reminder of battles past. But fear not, for every weakness, there's a strategy to turn it into a strength—or at least mitigate its impact.

Brutal and Honest Resume Feedback:

  1. Highlight the Upward Trend: You've already mentioned your last four semesters' GPA, which is great. Make sure this is prominently displayed and perhaps even include a brief note in your resume or cover letter explaining the upward trend. It's a story of resilience and determination.

  2. Major GPAs to the Rescue: Your major GPAs are impressive. Make these figures stand out. Recruiters love specialists, and these numbers show you've got the goods where it counts.

  3. Internship Experience: You mentioned internships with small financial firms. That's gold. Detail these experiences, focusing on achievements and how you added value to those firms. Quantify your successes wherever possible.

  4. Skills and Projects: With a background in CS, you likely have some technical skills that can set you apart. Highlight any programming languages, software, or tools you're proficient in. Also, if you've worked on any significant projects (either in school or personally) that demonstrate your skills, make sure these are front and center.

  5. Test Scores: If you have outstanding test scores (like GMAT, GRE, or relevant certification exams), include these. They can help counterbalance your CGPA.

  6. Networking and Personal Branding: Sometimes, it's not what you know but who you know. Leverage LinkedIn, alumni networks, and any professional connections you have. A referral can sometimes get your foot in the door where a resume alone might not.

  7. Customize Your Resume: Tailor your resume for each application. Highlight the most relevant experience and skills based on the job description. It's time-consuming but can significantly increase your chances.

  8. Cover Letter: Use your cover letter to tell your story. This is where you can explain the circumstances around your early academic struggles and how you overcame them. Make it a narrative of growth, resilience, and potential.

Remember, every rejection is just one step closer to an acceptance. Keep refining your approach, and don't lose hope. The finance world is vast, and there's a place for determined and skilled individuals like yourself. Keep swinging, and eventually, you'll hit that home run.

Sources: Resume Guidelines from a WSO Drop Reviewer, Resume and cover letter - a reviewers perspective, Need Resume Feedback, Why Your Resume Sucked A**, ANSWERED: Most Common Resume Questions

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