Hi everybody, I did not apply to any job in years and I'm not a native english speaker therefore I have lots of doubt about the quality of my resume. I would be grateful if you would critique it.
thanks!
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Hi there - don't have time for a full review but a few quick things that stood out to me:
Biggest Issue: Inconsistencies and formatting mistakes all over the place:
*Some titles capitalized, some not.
*Different types of dashes ("-" " --") for times
*using "since" for one position and dates for another,
*capitalization issues with section headings,
*Using group name (in bold?) for one position but not the other
Must be a bad translation, but what is "Full Contact" sport?
Remove your grammar school from the resume ... no one cares about your pre-university schooling (from 10 years ago no less)
Lots of other errors and problems, but hopefully this will give you somewhere to start
say "Native Language" instead of "mother tongue"
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