Resume critique - english is not my mother tongue

Hi everybody, I did not apply to any job in years and I'm not a native english speaker therefore I have lots of doubt about the quality of my resume. I would be grateful if you would critique it.

thanks!

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Hi there - don't have time for a full review but a few quick things that stood out to me:

  • Biggest Issue: Inconsistencies and formatting mistakes all over the place:

    *Some titles capitalized, some not.

    *Different types of dashes ("-" " --") for times

    *using "since" for one position and dates for another,

    *capitalization issues with section headings,

    *Using group name (in bold?) for one position but not the other

  • Must be a bad translation, but what is "Full Contact" sport?

  • Remove your grammar school from the resume ... no one cares about your pre-university schooling (from 10 years ago no less)

Lots of other errors and problems, but hopefully this will give you somewhere to start

 

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