Sophomore Resume Critique Request

Hey, sophomore at a non-target looking for a resume critique. Interested in investment management, and possibly IB or consulting if I'm lucky.

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Thank you in advance, and please don't hold back.

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Change "concentrations" to "majors" there's a difference, at my school at least, between the two. Basic familiarity with MS Excel sounds retarded.

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