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I actually like this format. A few nits: - Is there a space after the second examination for the School, India entry? - I'd consider removing school before uni (primary / form school). Doesn't have the level of specialization / relevance of uni degree - if you are using to show your "international background" you can leave it, but not super compelling - Month format - I'd recommend sticking to three letter format (Keep your Sept as Sep) - Your secondary bullets don't look distinguished enough. Looks like you are squeezing them in. The use of space you get from starting your bullets flush with the heading to the right of date is nice, but the secondary bullets look too tight. I think you have space to push out a bit - I would remove the leading "Was a member of a team" in the relevant coursework and maybe just end the bullet with "as part of a team". You want to be honest about sharing the workload, but don't distract from what you were doing by leading with a weak / passive start - Languages - Personally, I wouldn't put unless you have business command and even then I wouldn't put unless you have an active interest in working in an area where those languages are dominant. If you want to put as conversational fodder to complement your experience in North India, then that's fine. (I'm assuming your not actually Indian but lived there? You went to school in India for 10 years, but don't speak natively?) - Technical skills - remove Word, Excel and PowerPoint. And if possible move these items into the descriptions of your work experience.

 

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