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One question in addition, is it weird to say rising junior even though i am going into my 4th year in a 4 & 1/2 year plan. I am phrasing it like this for simplicity reasons, and the fact that I am essentially applying alongside rising juniors, and by units I am considered a junior. Thanks for all the advice you may have.

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To long, please TL;DR it and get straight to the key points. Please repose this in the resume review section in the near future.

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jashganz

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I kept it sub 300 words should I aim for something closer to 200-250? Thanks for your feedback.

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