Informal Email = Fail
(Monkey, 45
Points)
on 4/5/12 at 5:08pm
----Original Message-----
From: [Me]
To: [Boutique President]
Subject: Summer Internship Application
Hey [First Name], I've attached my resume and cover letter below.
Cheers,
[My Name]
-----His Reply---------
From: [Boutique President]
To: [Me]
Subject: RE: Summer Internship Application
Hey [First Name]? Is that any way to address a cover note looking for a job?
You've got to be kidding me. I didn't even look at your resume because I
don't like your attitude. No internship for you sir.






Hahahah!
Hahahah!
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Did you know [First Name]
Did you know [First Name] personally? If so, I'm not sure why he responded that way and you should respond apologizing even if the offer is still off.
If you didn't know [First Name] personally, or at all, then you f*cked yourself pretty good by being unprofessional and retarded.
I didn't know him. Guess i
I didn't know him. Guess i fucked up pretty hard here. I'm still thinking of apologizing though is that a good idea?
Respond with: "Hehe, good one
Respond with: "Hehe, good one bro. See you in summer."
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You really sent the first
You really sent the first email to this guy with nothing other than that one line? Are you retarded?
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im going to reply with
im going to reply with this
Mr.[Last Name], I do apologize for the informal tone of my email. On that note, good luck in the future.
Cheers,
Boreed wrote: Respond with:
Respond with: "Hehe, good one bro. See you in summer."
I laughed
happypantsmcgee wrote: You
You really sent the first email to this guy with nothing other than that one line? Are you retarded?
this isnt cold emailing for a job. it was a posting on my schools career site
deadcatbounce
You really sent the first email to this guy with nothing other than that one line? Are you retarded?
this isnt cold emailing for a job. it was a posting on my schools career site
Unless they are a VERY close family friend, there's no reason to just say "Hey, here's my resume"
Anacott_CEO
You really sent the first email to this guy with nothing other than that one line? Are you retarded?
this isnt cold emailing for a job. it was a posting on my schools career site
Unless they are a VERY close family friend, there's no reason to just say "Hey, here's my resume"
even if its a job posting? im not sure what more to add other than state the reason for emailing (subject line?)
deadcatbounce
You really sent the first email to this guy with nothing other than that one line? Are you retarded?
this isnt cold emailing for a job. it was a posting on my schools career site
Unless they are a VERY close family friend, there's no reason to just say "Hey, here's my resume"
even if its a job posting? im not sure what more to add other than state the reason for emailing (subject line?)
Just the way you said it came off very unprofessional. Mr. [Last Name], I have attached my resume and cover letter to this email for your review. I am very interested in the position and I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you. - would've been received a lot better
Anacott_CEO
You really sent the first email to this guy with nothing other than that one line? Are you retarded?
this isnt cold emailing for a job. it was a posting on my schools career site
Unless they are a VERY close family friend, there's no reason to just say "Hey, here's my resume"
even if its a job posting? im not sure what more to add other than state the reason for emailing (subject line?)
Just the way you said it came off very unprofessional. Mr. [Last Name], I have attached my resume and cover letter to this email for your review. I am very interested in the position and I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you. - would've been received a lot better
noted for future emails, thanks. Yes i do feel stupid at the moment!
live and learn. Always use
live and learn. Always use caution and try to be as formal as possible
LOL wow. Hahahahaha this is
LOL wow. Hahahahaha this is hilarious. I'd be laughing my ass off if I got that email. Hahahahhaha
You should respond with: sorry brah, my bad. we cool?
When you go on a date, do you
When you go on a date, do you show up, whip your dick out and say "hey, here it is, give me what I want?"
Professionally speaking, you just did that.
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Don't fucking use "cheers" as
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Haha, I'm surprised he even
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can't respond "u mad brah?"
Boreed wrote: Respond with:
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Anacott_CEO wrote: Boreed
Who you calling a psycho?!?!
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How socially inept are you?
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happypantsmcgee wrote: You
And no, I don't think the op
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I would hire the shit out of
Very interesting tactic...
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You better hope this guy
L M F A O dude, you just made
LOL I cant believe this made
You messed up a bit on that
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